WILF: I use a mixture of short and joined sentences in my writing. Sometimes use sentences with conjunctions at the start.
I sometimes use different sentence forms deliberately to get the reader’s attention.
I use ‘tense’ (past, present or future) correctly.
I use capital letters, full stops, exclamation marks and question marks correctly without being reminded..
I sometimes use list commas, apostrophes for contractions and speech marks.
Writing Task: Think back to a really special experience you have had. It might be a birthday, a family dinner or a trip somewhere. Write a recount about it. |
Next steps:tense present
Starter sentence:
It started out just like any other day.
It was a boring grey morning.'My sister and I were slightly disappointed.'
"No interschools," my sister moaned.
When we got school I asked Mrs Cornelius,"is the interschools", " yes",she replied
We sat down at the sun shelter.
Now we were at the village pools.I waited a while , and then my race was called out.
I heard chears, and then I heard my name, but it was too late the race began.
The water was sloshey and wet.It stang my toes, as I frantically paddled along the water.
Finally, I was at the end of the pool.
No comments:
Post a Comment