W.A.L.T: to write an introduction for a narrative by describing the setting.
Next steps: to write a different style of an introduction.
Here is my story.
100 YEARS AGO
The ice glimmered across the ocean. Topaz was ice skating. She slipped down to an unknown island called Crystalyna, The land of Tears. Topaz died years after leaving all but a powerful gem.
100 YEARS LATER
The daffodils made the garden colourful, welcoming the first day of Spring on. Birds chirped in the trees and the pink roses finally opened! Trudge Trudge. Emerald walked across the dewy grass. Her boots damp, she found what she was looking for. The Topaz lay still, lying in a bed of leaf litter. Emerald picked it up and examined it.
“What a nice bit of work,”she said. “Yes, very nice,”out of the crystal came a voice, “you can find me in the river next to your place, the river of time. It will take you to the land of tears but beware Rogwart lurks around that area.”
Emerald put the Topaz inside and wrote mum a letter.
Gone to river for an hour
Love❤️ Emerald
Emerald ran to the river,ice skates in one hand.
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Ten minutes later she was at the river. Emerald jumped onto the ice and fell down, down, down…
Suddenly she jerked. All around her were glimmering crystals. Topaz,Opal,Amethyst,Emerald,Sapphire,Quartz and more.
“Wow” said Emerald amazed. She walked passed tall crystals and people came out of them.
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Soon she felt completely lost. There was a huge Topaz tower in front of her. Emerald walked into it. A little Arctic fox stood up. The fox wasn't speaking but its came into her brain.
“Emerald you are the first human here. Any way I am Blizzard.”
Blizzard stepped aside to show the most beautiful gem. A Topaz mixed with all other crystals of the world.
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It was now evening. Emerald lay down in a crystal bed and fell asleep.
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On black island Rogwart knew it was his only chance. He went to the land of tears and finally got the gem.
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